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Monday, February 24, 2020

Fire Breathing Dragon

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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 4, 2020 at 2:46 PM

    Great work because you thought of reality, that snow would melt. It reminds me of a bomb fire. Next time please try to make the story longer.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 4, 2020 at 2:52 PM

    Hi Hebe,
    I really like all the great describing words in your story!
    It reminds me of the freezing snow. Next time make sure you add full stops at the end of your story.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 4, 2020 at 2:57 PM

    Fantastic work. Hebe love the describing words in it.Maybe next time you could make the font a bit bigger so it is easier to see. It reminds me of my favourite book Wings of Fire.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 5, 2020 at 2:59 PM

    I think you put a lot of effort into your writing about the fire breathing dragon because of your descriptive words. Your story makes me think of a bomb fire. maybe you cold make your own picture next time.

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  5. AnonymousJune 10, 2020 at 2:32 PM

    hi Hebe i really like your story and your describing words keep it up. it reminds me of when people go skiing when it's hot. next time can you try right some more please because there wasen't that much.

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